Hmm. That's an "air ship" alright. XD _{Reminds me a bit of the one in an old Final Fantasy! IV, I think it was...}

Who's the person on the right bottom? "Jei Dun?"

Oh! Another thing, "Souri" is said with a Japanese pronunciation, right?

I'm sure slow pages are dull to post, but it's important to be balanced for the sake of professional storytelling. Slow chapters are the same way...they get no reviews/comments/love in general despite their importance. XD

--
"Mother smother, it's Jenova's friggin' head!" Reno, Advent Children

Owner of the Infinite Undiscovery fan club, ~TheLiberationForce.

Admin of the Star Ocean: The Last Hope fan club, *FaizexLymle-club.

~Proud member of =xRedLeatherx

Yes, that's Jei Dun. ^^

Since I'm really bad at naming female characters, my sister named Souri for me. The way she originally pronounced it was Sor-ee (kinda like Sora). That's how I still pronounce it today.

--
Like Star Ocean the Last Hope? Like FaizexLymle? Join the FaizexLymle club! ~[link]
-------------
Program terminated.

kewl
umm, where's souri's other leg? O.o

--
my japanese name is 浜野 Hamano (seaside field) 久美子 Kumiko (eternal beautiful child)

o.O They're both there...

--
Like Star Ocean the Last Hope? Like FaizexLymle? Join the FaizexLymle club! ~[link]
-------------
Program terminated.

no they aren't....wait..*looks closer* OHHHHHHHHH
nvm

--
my japanese name is 浜野 Hamano (seaside field) 久美子 Kumiko (eternal beautiful child)

Hooray for AIR SHIP!

--
Those who carry the dragon blood of memory, spread your prideful wings and roar whole-heartedly; your home is here, lies deep inside our heart.

I can feel the breeeeeze in the middle pannel. And the birds (or just the ones outside my house right now)

Maybe you could do the same thing as me, which would be to create about 5 pages and upload them all at once, then work on another set of 5 pages, to keep the story going a bit more fluent.

--
~fireemblem-club

*nod* That's Chinese, right? It's been ages since I played Dynasty Warriors, so what I absorbed of Chinese pronunciations is gone...

Ah, okay, Sor-ee. That's simplier than I thought. XD I was thinking Soh-oo-ree. _{Kinda like how, for reasons waaaaay beyond comprehension, I thought Faize was said "fa-I-zay" with a long I. Too many Japanese flash cards for me! XD}

Naming characters in general can be hard. >.> I used to just pull names off the top of my head when I started writing and came up with pretty good ones like "Cea Mizurakie" and "Ahkyia Ragnarok" but as Ahky's name hints, I started looking toward mythology for names in more recent times, but I don't think that's gotten me much further. XD Behind The Name is a good website with strong search engines and gigantic lists and paired with Wikipedia to research mythological names, it makes naming a lot easier. XD

--
"Mother smother, it's Jenova's friggin' head!" Reno, Advent Children

Owner of the Infinite Undiscovery fan club, ~TheLiberationForce.

Admin of the Star Ocean: The Last Hope fan club, *FaizexLymle-club.

~Proud member of =xRedLeatherx

Well, I don't know about Chinese... "Jei Dun" is just my Fae spelling of "Jaden", but I'll go into that later. xD

I've used that website before.. I've found quite a few good names. Some I've used in Land of the Sky.

--
Like Star Ocean the Last Hope? Like FaizexLymle? Join the FaizexLymle club! ~[link]
-------------
Program terminated.